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Hi Sharon
How are you ? i am writing to introduce me . You are a LyLy friend , right? She is introduces you to me . My name is Lingg .I am from Viet Nam and i live in Phu Minh town with my family . i am 14 years old . and you? how are you been? How old are you? and finally , if you need then feel free to contact me via : Lingg224455@gmail.com or contact me at this phone 022*****73. Hope to hear from you soon
LyLy s friend
LingLing
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- Câu "I am writing to introduce me": câu này bị nhầm bạn nhé, nếu dịch ra nó sẽ bị lệch lạc, bạn nên sửa lại thành " I wrote/write this letter to introduce myself"
- Câu " You are a Lyly friend, right?" Câu này bạn nên chuyển thành " You are Lyly's friend, right?
- Câu " she is introduces you to me" Câu này bỏ "is" đi, chuyển câu thành "she introduced you to me"
- Câu "How are you been?" => How are you?
- Câu "how old are you?" đúng rồi, nhưng nếu bạn không muốn lặp từ thì dùng cách " What is your age?" nhé
- Câu "And finally...."=> Finally, if you need to communicate with me, please contact with this email: Lingg224455@gmail.com. Beside, you can also contact with this phone number:022*****73"
- Còn cụm từ "lyly s friend" thì bạn thêm dấu ' vào giữa lyly với s nhé
CHÚC BẠN HỌC TỐT!!
bởi Vương Mộc Anh 07/04/2021Like (1) Báo cáo sai phạm -
"I wrote this letter to introduce me" sẽ hay hơn nha.
"You are Lyly's friend, right?" Ko biết giải thik s.
"She introduced you to me" thì j đó lạ lạ đổi thành thì quá khứ đơn nha.
"How are you been" thì hơi sai nên có thể đổi thành là "How is going" hoặc là "How are you" là đc rồi.
"And Finally" trở đi thì có thể đổi thành là "Finally, feel free to contact me via email, it's ...@gmail.com, beside, you can contact me with my phone number: blah blah blah".
"Hope to hear you soon" sẽ đúng hoặc có thể là "Hope to see your letter".
Lyly's friend nha, thêm ' vào là đc
Chúc học tốt.
bởi Lê Anh Khoa 27/04/2021Like (0) Báo cáo sai phạm
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